only best students should be rewarded雅思寫作7.5分范文

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Some people think only the best students should be rewarded.Others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvement.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人(ren)認為(wei)只有最好的(de)學(xue)生應該被獎勵(li)。其他人(ren)則認為(wei)獎勵(li)展現出(chu)進步的(de)學(xue)生更加重要。討論雙方觀點(dian)被給(gei)出(chu)你(ni)自己(ji)的(de)意見。

雅思寫作7.5分范文

開頭段

People are divided on the issue of rewarding students for academic achievements.Some support the idea of rewarding pupils who are the toppers,whereas others opine that it is better to reward those who show major improvements.This essay intends to delve into both perspectives.I,however,opine in encouraging both categories of students with rewards.

人們在獎勵(li)學(xue)(xue)(xue)生(sheng)(sheng)(sheng)這(zhe)一問題上存在不(bu)同的意(yi)見。一些人認(ren)(ren)為應(ying)(ying)該獎勵(li)優秀學(xue)(xue)(xue)生(sheng)(sheng)(sheng)，而(er)其他人則認(ren)(ren)為最好獎勵(li)那(nei)些展現出(chu)巨大進(jin)步(bu)的學(xue)(xue)(xue)生(sheng)(sheng)(sheng)。這(zhe)一文章將探(tan)討雙方觀(guan)點(dian)。然而(er)，我(wo)認(ren)(ren)為兩類學(xue)(xue)(xue)生(sheng)(sheng)(sheng)都應(ying)(ying)該得到鼓勵(li)。

獎勵優秀學生

There are several reasons,why the students with the best academic performance should be granted an incentive.The core of this argument is that rewarding them will motivate all other students to study hard and achieve the best results.Exams are like a competition,and the winners deserve to be recognized.

出(chu)于以下原因(yin)，擁有優秀學(xue)術表現的(de)學(xue)生(sheng)應該被(bei)給予獎(jiang)(jiang)勵(li)。這一觀(guan)點的(de)核(he)心在于，獎(jiang)(jiang)勵(li)他們(men)會激(ji)勵(li)所有學(xue)生(sheng)努力學(xue)習，取(qu)得(de)(de)最好的(de)成(cheng)績。考(kao)試就像(xiang)競賽(sai)一樣，而獲勝者應該得(de)(de)到認可。

獎勵進步學生

However,it’s undeniable that in the same class,there are various student levels.The toppers are very few and are in most cases capable of working hard as well as doing a smart study.They know how much effort is required in which areas.All students are not so gifted.This is from Laokaoya website.The mediocre students,despite spending lots of time and effort,are still incapable of competing with those having higher IQ.Therefore,it is imperative to acknowledge their effort also.The policy of rewarding them would encourage a wide range of students who persevere and make improvements in their results.

然而(er)，不可否認的(de)(de)是，在(zai)(zai)同(tong)一班級中存在(zai)(zai)著(zhu)不同(tong)水平(ping)的(de)(de)學(xue)生(sheng)。優秀學(xue)生(sheng)很少，而(er)且(qie)大多數(shu)情況下不僅刻苦，而(er)且(qie)懂得如何取(qu)巧。他們(men)(men)知道相應的(de)(de)領域需(xu)要多少努(nu)力(li)。并非所有(you)的(de)(de)學(xue)生(sheng)都(dou)天賦異(yi)稟。普(pu)通(tong)學(xue)生(sheng)，無(wu)論投(tou)入多少時間和(he)經歷，仍然無(wu)法跟那些擁有(you)更高智商的(de)(de)人競(jing)爭。因此，承認他們(men)(men)的(de)(de)努(nu)力(li)同(tong)樣重(zhong)要。獎勵他們(men)(men)的(de)(de)政策會鼓勵各種學(xue)生(sheng)堅持下去，并努(nu)力(li)進步。

兩者都需要獎勵

I believe that encouraging all achievers is a must.The achievement of the toppers is visible to all and should be remunerated with reward.However,the onus is on the teachers to identify the students who show the maximum improvements and encourage them by bringing them into the limelight.For example,if a student gets 40%marks in the first trimester exams,but manages to reach 60-70%in the second trimester,then he should be given due recognition for his hard work.This would be a better motivation for a wider group of students.

我認(ren)為有(you)(you)(you)必要鼓勵(li)(li)所(suo)有(you)(you)(you)人。優(you)秀學(xue)生的(de)成就每個人都能(neng)看到(dao)，因此應該予以獎(jiang)勵(li)(li)。然而(er)，老師有(you)(you)(you)責任(ren)找(zhao)出那些進步最大的(de)學(xue)生，并通過讓他們得(de)到(dao)關注來(lai)鼓勵(li)(li)他們。例如(ru)，如(ru)果(guo)一名(ming)學(xue)生在第一次考試中得(de)了(le)40分，但(dan)在下一次考試中努力考到(dao)了(le)60-70分，那么他的(de)努力應該得(de)到(dao)認(ren)可(ke)。這對于(yu)大多數學(xue)生而(er)言(yan)會(hui)是更好的(de)激勵(li)(li)。

結論

To conclude,it is necessary to reward all achievers–the toppers,as well as the ones showing good progress in their study

總(zong)的來說(shuo)，有必要獎勵所有取得成就的人，既(ji)包括(kuo)優秀學生，也包括(kuo)那(nei)些在(zai)學習上展現出進步(bu)的人。

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