2022年8月27日雅思大作文范文:人們是否有自由做任何運動

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned,while others think people should have the freedom to do any sport or activity.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會生活類

【題目解析】

題目大意：有些(xie)人(ren)認為危險(xian)運(yun)動應(ying)該禁止(zhi)，而其(qi)他人(ren)則認為人(ren)們(men)應(ying)有自由做任何運(yun)動或活(huo)動。

題(ti)(ti)型特(te)點：本題(ti)(ti)屬于多(duo)方觀點討論題(ti)(ti)型。考生須對(dui)話題(ti)(ti)中對(dui)立的雙方觀點展(zhan)開討論，并表明作者自己的立場。

本(ben)文結(jie)構：開(kai)頭段引入話題和表(biao)明立(li)場(chang)、三個主體段分別論述三方觀點，結(jie)尾重申(shen)個人立(li)場(chang)。

【難點】本題(ti)話題(ti)并(bing)不難理解。但構思過程中應該注意將話題(ti)相關概(gai)念（例如危(wei)險運動是什(shen)么、危(wei)險的原因在于什(shen)么等(deng)）作具體化處理，避免過于籠統。

【寫作思路】

開頭段(duan)：眾所周知，一些體育鍛煉方式，特別是參與讓人腎上腺素飆升(sheng)的冒險運動(dong)，可能導(dao)致受傷甚(shen)至死亡。盡管(guan)擔憂(you)不(bu)無(wu)道(dao)理(li)，但徹(che)底禁(jin)止這(zhe)些活動(dong)不(bu)一定(ding)是最佳解決(jue)方案(an)。

主體段1：有些人(ren)贊成全面叫停易(yi)發(fa)事故運(yun)動(dong)(dong)，他(ta)們的(de)(de)觀點可(ke)以理解。家長(chang)們將孩子的(de)(de)安(an)全放(fang)在首位，可(ke)能歡迎這一政策。這些學習者年(nian)紀尚小、技巧生(sheng)疏，盡管只在有經驗的(de)(de)專業(ye)人(ren)士監(jian)督下(xia)嘗(chang)試危險動(dong)(dong)作——如攔截對手(shou)——仍有扭(niu)傷和(he)骨折(zhe)的(de)(de)風險。同樣，救援工作者會支(zhi)持對危險活動(dong)(dong)進行嚴格監(jian)管。他(ta)們經常被派往偏遠地區搜索(suo)和(he)運(yun)送(song)受傷的(de)(de)登山者和(he)攀(pan)巖者，很清楚(chu)除了不(bu)可(ke)預測的(de)(de)因(yin)素，疲勞和(he)熱身不(bu)足都會讓專業(ye)和(he)業(ye)余人(ren)士受傷。

主體段2：還有(you)(you)一些人說，參不(bu)參加有(you)(you)風(feng)險活動(dong)是個人選(xuan)擇，當(dang)局不(bu)應該(gai)微觀(guan)管理。青少(shao)年醉(zui)心于(yu)(yu)測試自身身體極限，又因此(ci)得到同(tong)齡人認(ren)可(ke)，所(suo)以(yi)(yi)熱(re)衷(zhong)于(yu)(yu)嘗試驚險動(dong)作。他們(men)認(ren)為(wei)跑酷和花式自行車技(ji)巧盡(jin)管存在風(feng)險，但不(bu)應被當(dang)局限制。有(you)(you)經(jing)驗的極限運動(dong)愛好(hao)者也(ye)認(ren)為(wei)自己有(you)(you)權對活動(dong)作出判斷。他們(men)通常持有(you)(you)相關能力證書和培(pei)訓(xun)記錄，所(suo)以(yi)(yi)認(ren)為(wei)規避風(feng)險的政策(ce)并不(bu)合(he)理、過于(yu)(yu)武斷。

主體段(duan)3：我認為這個問題(ti)取決(jue)于涉及的(de)具體行為和(he)可用資源。就接觸性運動而言，訓練(lian)和(he)比賽通常有(you)專用場地，具有(you)必要的(de)技術(shu)和(he)醫療支(zhi)持，因此沒有(you)必要禁(jin)(jin)止(zhi)活(huo)動。相比之下，有(you)些項目依(yi)賴自然(ran)環(huan)境(jing)——尤其(qi)在(zai)偏遠地區開展(zhan)——危險(xian)性可能大(da)增。所以，在(zai)徹底研究活(huo)動地點并配備必要設施之前，應禁(jin)(jin)止(zhi)在(zai)那里開展(zhan)洞穴(xue)潛水和(he)其(qi)他探險(xian)活(huo)動。

結尾段：總的(de)來說，盡管經常出現受傷甚至死亡，但(dan)全面禁(jin)止(zhi)危險(xian)運動(dong)(dong)并不合理。只要運動(dong)(dong)項(xiang)目能(neng)確保合理的(de)安(an)全水平，就可以向愛好者開放。

【參考范文】

It is common knowledge that some types of physical exercises,especially adrenaline-packed adventure sports,can cause injuries or even fatalities.Despite legitimate concerns about these activities,it is not so certain whether outright prohibition is the best solution.

Some people support a ban on all accident-prone sports and I can understand their point of view.Parents probably welcome this policy,because of the priority placed on the safety of their children.These young,unskilled learners are often at risk of sprains and fractures,even though they only attempt risky moves,such as tackling an opponent,under the watch of experienced professionals.Similarly,rescue workers would support stringent control of access to dangerous activities.Routinely dispatched to remote locations to find and transport injured mountaineers and rock climbers,they understand how fatigue and insufficient warmup,besides unpredictable factors,can result in injuries for professionals and amateurs alike.

Others who say that participation in risky activities is a matter of personal choice and should therefore be free of micromanagement by the authorities.Teenagers,drawn to the idea of testing their physical limits and the associated peer recognition,are keen to try stunning maneuvers.They would argue that the freedom to perform parkour moves and freestyle bike tricks,despite the risks involved,should not be limited by the authorities.Experienced extreme sports enthusiasts,too,believe that they are entitled to judgement calls about their own activities.They typically hold relevant competency certificates and training records,so they can find risk-averse policies unreasonable and arbitrary.

I think the question depends on the type of actions involved and the resources available.As far as contact sports are concerned,training and competitions usually take place in purpose-built venues that feature necessary technical and medical support,so there is no need to ban these activities.On the other hand,sporting events heavily reliant on the physical environment,especially those in hard-to-reach locations,may be substantially more dangerous.This is why cave diving and other forms of adventure should be disallowed until a site has been thoroughly studied and equipped with necessary facilities.

In general,despite the often-cited injuries and even fatalities,it is not reasonable to impose an across-the-board prohibition against dangerous sports.Enthusiasts can be given the freedom to participate in their favourite form of exercise as long as a reasonable level of safety can be ensured.

(392 words)

【語言積累】

1.adrenaline-packed讓腎上腺素飆升的

2.accident-prone意(yi)外頻發的

3.at risk of sprains and fractures有扭(niu)傷(shang)和骨(gu)折(zhe)的風險

4.tackling an opponent攔截(jie)對手(shou)

5.under the watch of experienced professionals在經驗豐(feng)富的專業人士(shi)監督下(xia)

6.stringent control嚴格監管

7.fatigue and insufficient warmup疲勞(lao)和熱身不足(zu)

8.micromanaged by the authorities由當(dang)局微觀管理

9.peer recognition同(tong)輩(bei)、同(tong)齡人(ren)的認同(tong)

10.entitled to有權享用/做某事

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