雅思大(da)作文(wen)范文(wen)分析——人工智能，對于(yu)這(zhe)個問題，小編(bian)就(jiu)來為大(da)家分析一(yi)下

雅思大作文范文分析——人工智能

題目：

Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future.Others,by contrast,are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

翻譯：有人(ren)認為，在不久的將來(lai)，人(ren)工(gong)智能領域的發展(zhan)將對我(wo)(wo)們的生活(huo)產生積(ji)極影響。而另外一(yi)些(xie)人(ren)則認為我(wo)(wo)們并沒有為此做(zuo)好(hao)準備。討論雙邊的觀點，并給出自己(ji)的看法(fa)。

話題：科技類

類型：雙邊討論

關鍵詞：artificial intelligence,lives in the near future,not prepared

解析：

說到人工智能（AI）對(dui)于很多人而言，最熟悉的應該就是呆萌小助手(shou)‘Siri’啦，當(dang)然還(huan)有Bixby，小愛(ai)同學(xue)等等，既可以(yi)陪(pei)你聊天(tian)，又可以(yi)查天(tian)氣，設鬧鐘。雖然有時(shi)候還(huan)是有點(dian)不(bu)聽話或是喜歡‘裝傻’，但也的確為我們的生活(huo)增(zeng)添了不(bu)少便利。

在DeepMind,英偉(wei)達(da)等大公司看中AI的巨大前景，轟轟烈烈的開展研究時(shi)，大眾對于人工(gong)智能的認識卻并不(bu)深，往往停(ting)留在語音助手，智能客服上面(mian)。

直到(dao)一(yi)個又(you)一(yi)個令人(ren)(ren)(ren)震驚的(de)(de)(de)新(xin)聞(wen)出(chu)現在媒體報道中，DeepMind的(de)(de)(de)人(ren)(ren)(ren)工智(zhi)能(neng)機器人(ren)(ren)(ren)AlphaGo通過對百萬盤真(zhen)人(ren)(ren)(ren)對戰棋局的(de)(de)(de)研究(jiu)，以4：1的(de)(de)(de)成(cheng)績擊敗了世界(jie)圍(wei)棋李世石(shi)。(大(da)家可(ke)以用作舉例論(lun)證：AlphaGo is an AI developed by Google-owned British company DeepMind,and had already wrapped up a historic victory on Saturday by becoming the first ever computer program to beat the world champion Lee Se-dol.)

孟買人(ren)工智能創業(ye)公(gong)司(si)MoglA通過2000萬個(ge)社(she)交媒體數(shu)據點(dian)分析了社(she)交媒體上人(ren)們(men)的(de)情(qing)緒(xu)，的(de)通過了解民(min)意預測出了美國總統大選的(de)結(jie)果(guo)-特朗普(pu)獲勝。而(er)這一結(jie)果(guo)是很多內部人(ren)士都預測失敗(bai)的(de)。(MogIA correctly predicted the past four presidential elections including the Trump one.)

大眾(zhong)慢慢意(yi)識到，人工智(zhi)能的(de)聰(cong)明才智(zhi)及復雜性。意(yi)識到原來鋼鐵俠(xia)的(de)賈(jia)維斯是可能真實(shi)存在的(de)。繼續發展下去(qu)，人工智(zhi)能很快就(jiu)會在各個領(ling)域超越(yue)人類。AI system becomes more powerful–superior to human performance in many or nearly all domains.

人工智能(neng)(neng)比人類能(neng)(neng)干并不可怕，人類可以利用其才能(neng)(neng)為自己的生(sheng)活(huo)增添便利。

但(dan)是(shi)極其聰明又不知疲倦的(de)(de)(de)AI has the potential to improve productivity,efficiency and accuracy.會有很多(duo)人因其失去工(gong)(gong)作(zuo)(zuo)，普華(hua)永道曾發(fa)布(bu)數據(ju)預測到(dao)(dao)2030年，機器人將占(zhan)據(ju)日本21%以上(shang)的(de)(de)(de)工(gong)(gong)作(zuo)(zuo)崗(gang)位、英國30%的(de)(de)(de)工(gong)(gong)作(zuo)(zuo)崗(gang)位、德國35%的(de)(de)(de)工(gong)(gong)作(zuo)(zuo)崗(gang)位和美國38%的(de)(de)(de)工(gong)(gong)作(zuo)(zuo)崗(gang)位。到(dao)(dao)下個世(shi)紀，他(ta)們將占(zhan)據(ju)人類現有工(gong)(gong)作(zuo)(zuo)的(de)(de)(de)一半以上(shang)。尤(you)其是(shi)那些jobs involving repetitive or basic problem-solving tasks.

當有一(yi)(yi)天(tian)人(ren)(ren)工(gong)智能發展到自我實現階段，他(ta)們像人(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)一(yi)(yi)樣要求自己的權利(li)。當他(ta)們不再只是做邏輯思(si)考和計算，開始(shi)出(chu)現感性思(si)維時(shi)，人(ren)(ren)工(gong)智能對(dui)人(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)的威脅或許(xu)就會出(chu)現。如(ru)(ru)果極其聰明的人(ren)(ren)工(gong)智能不再聽(ting)命如(ru)(ru)舊，不再遵循(xun)人(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)的旨意，人(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)又將如(ru)(ru)何應(ying)對(dui)。

而這樣(yang)的人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)工智能其實(shi)已經離我(wo)們很近了。因曾揚言(yan)要毀滅(mie)人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)而被人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)熟知(zhi)的機(ji)器人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)索(suo)菲亞，在2017年(nian)10月獲(huo)得了沙特阿(a)拉伯(bo)授予的公民身份。而她的名(ming)言(yan)：人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)不犯(fan)我(wo)我(wo)不犯(fan)人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)（If you’re nice to me and I will be nice to you),更是令人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)毛骨(gu)悚然。倘若有一(yi)天，像電(dian)影(ying)《終(zhong)結(jie)者》中那樣(yang)，機(ji)器人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)想要反叛人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)，占領世界，人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)是否有能力戰(zhan)勝自己親(qin)手(shou)締(di)造(zao)出來的全知(zhi)全能的敵人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)呢？

太空探索(suo)技術的CEO馬斯克曾(ceng)(ceng)說(shuo)：“我們需要萬分(fen)警惕人(ren)工(gong)智(zhi)能(neng)，他(ta)們比核武器更加危(wei)險”而霍金（Stephen Hawking）也曾(ceng)(ceng)說(shuo)：the emergence of artificial intelligence could be the"worst event in the history of our civilization."（作文可用）

人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)(lei)至今也很難預測及探究(jiu)AI最終會進化成什么樣子，是(shi)(shi)拉(la)開(kai)和人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)(lei)的(de)(de)戰爭，還是(shi)(shi)與人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)(lei)和平共(gong)處。但(dan)需(xu)防患于未(wei)然，對AI的(de)(de)獨立運作需(xu)要加(jia)以嚴格的(de)(de)控制(zhi)，保證是(shi)(shi)人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)類(lei)(lei)(lei)在控制(zhi)機器，而(er)非機器在控制(zhi)人(ren)(ren)(ren)(ren)，（對于這個題目，還有(you)一個有(you)些難度，但(dan)是(shi)(shi)可(ke)以寫的(de)(de)點，列給大家，大家可(ke)以酌情使用：

AI-enabled terrorism:Artificial intelligence will change the way conflicts are fought from autonomous drones,robotic swarms,and remote and nanorobot attacks.In addition to being concerned with a nuclear arms race,we'll need to monitor the global autonomous weapons race.）

好啦，分析了這么多，咱們來一起看看今天的范文：

People seem to be either excited or worried（很巧妙的(de)改寫了題目）about the future impact of artificial intelligence.Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view(可直接搬到自己的(de)文章中使(shi)用);I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive（adj.憂慮的(de)；不安的(de)）about its possible negative effects.

（開頭段：題(ti)目改寫+觀點(dian)給出—可(ke)借用的部分：People seem to be either xx or xx about題(ti)目事件.）

On the one hand,the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits.Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can,especially in areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data.For example,robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than a human doctor,and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves.（這個例子(zi)大家可以(yi)記(ji)住，科(ke)技(ji)改變(bian)生(sheng)活的題目中(zhong)都可以(yi)廣泛使用-科(ke)技(ji)為(wei)人類帶(dai)來的好(hao)處）Such technologies can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors.It is easy to imagine how these developments,and many others,will steadily improve our quality of life.

（主(zhu)體(ti)1段-方觀(guan)點：一共5句話，結(jie)構：觀(guan)點-解(jie)釋-舉例-分析-總結(jie)）

On the other hand,I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful.In the short term,it is likely that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software programs.For example,self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies(原型：redundancy：名詞-裁(cai)員，解(jie)雇)in driving jobs,such as lorry（貨車(che)）drivers,taxi drivers and bus drivers.In the medium term,if intelligent technologies gradually take jobs away from humans,we may find that people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life.A longer term fear is that computers become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight（名詞：負(fu)責，照管，監督）and without regard for our well-being.

（主體2段-第(di)二方觀點-結構：遞進式-短期(qi)-中(zhong)期(qi)-長期(qi)）

In conclusion,while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways,the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.

（結尾：總結前(qian)文(wen)-可借用句型：While A will no doubt do sth.,the potential risks of A should not be ignored.）

這篇文(wen)章(zhang)出(chu)自Simon老師(shi)，對于Native Speaker又身為前考(kao)官的Simon而言(yan)，其(qi)英語語言(yan)駕馭能力肯定是很強的。這篇文(wen)章(zhang)的句型及論證(zheng)方(fang)法都很不錯，尤(you)其(qi)是主體2段的遞進式(shi)論證(zheng)很出(chu)彩，大家可以(yi)學習借鑒使用哦。

但(dan)本文中(zhong)有一(yi)點小(xiao)編(bian)要提醒大家(jia)：

我們可以看到其在開(kai)頭的表態為較中立的態度(du)(du)。想要(yao)看中立態度(du)(du)怎(zen)么寫(xie)的同學可以好好看看這篇文章(zhang)。

但對于(yu)寫(xie)作分(fen)數(shu)在6.5分(fen)以下的(de)(de)同學，這種中立態(tai)度的(de)(de)寫(xie)法不推(tui)薦給大(da)家，即(ji)便是雙邊討(tao)論(lun)(lun)類的(de)(de)文章，雙邊雖(sui)都要討(tao)論(lun)(lun)到，也不推(tui)薦大(da)家進行使用。

以上就是要和(he)大家(jia)分(fen)(fen)享(xiang)的(de)“雅(ya)思大作文(wen)范(fan)文(wen)分(fen)(fen)析——人工智(zhi)能(neng) ”，希望小編(bian)能(neng)夠幫助到大家(jia)

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