2021年12月30雅思大作文范文

2021年12月30雅思大作文范文:網絡(luo)可以取代學校嗎，關于這個問題(ti)，接下來中國(guo)教育(yu)在(zai)線就給大家慢慢解答。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

教育類

【題目解析】

題(ti)目大意(yi)：能(neng)夠透過互聯網獲取的(de)信息如(ru)此(ci)之(zhi)多，兒童(tong)不再需要上學，在家學習效果(guo)也同樣(yang)好。

題(ti)型特點：本題(ti)屬于(yu)同意(yi)與(yu)否題(ti)型。考生需要(yao)針對話題(ti)表達明確的立場(chang)，內容完(wan)整(zheng)涵蓋話題(ti)核(he)心概念便可(ke)。

本文結構：開頭段引入話題和表明立場(chang)、三個主體段分別(bie)介紹(shao)三個相關的理(li)由、結尾重申(shen)觀點。

【難(nan)點】對本題中涉及的兩種(zhong)教育/學習方式，考生需要討論是(shi)替(ti)代關系(xi)是(shi)否成立。如果僅(jin)僅(jin)表(biao)達兩者可以共同存(cun)在，未強調(diao)是(shi)否認同替(ti)代關系(xi)，則不屬于完整(zheng)扣(kou)題。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：一(yi)些教育(yu)(yu)學家認為，近年來互聯(lian)網興起和信息爆炸，為全面電子學習鋪平了道路，并(bing)將(jiang)最終使傳(chuan)統(tong)的學校教育(yu)(yu)過時。雖然(ran)這種新模式確實有獨特的好(hao)處，但(dan)它不太可能取代(dai)久經考驗的課堂教學方法(fa)，主(zhu)要有三個原(yuan)因。

主(zhu)體(ti)段(duan)(duan)1：對在線學習(xi)的(de)主(zhu)要(yao)擔憂是缺乏專(zhuan)業教育工(gong)作者的(de)指導。在大多數情況下，網上提(ti)供(gong)的(de)內容并非為(wei)了教育而設計(ji)，因(yin)此單靠家長往(wang)往(wang)不可能準確評估是否適合孩(hai)(hai)子。相反，經驗(yan)豐(feng)富的(de)教師能夠更高(gao)效地(di)策劃適合孩(hai)(hai)子年(nian)齡段(duan)(duan)的(de)材料和微(wei)調學習(xi)任務，以(yi)適應學生(sheng)的(de)需要(yao)。

主體段(duan)2：反(fan)對虛擬學習的(de)另一個原因(yin)是在家(jia)庭(ting)環(huan)境(jing)中(zhong)難以消除干(gan)擾(rao)(rao)。當坐在餐桌前看(kan)(kan)筆記本電腦時，家(jia)庭(ting)成員(yuan)的(de)閑(xian)聊和廚房里突然出現的(de)噪(zao)音會轉移(yi)孩(hai)子們(men)的(de)注(zhu)意(yi)力(li)，忽(hu)略(lve)學習內容。相比之(zhi)下，專用教室和教師監督令上課時注(zhu)意(yi)力(li)不受(shou)干(gan)擾(rao)(rao)，因(yin)此從長遠來看(kan)(kan)效果更好。

主體段3：另一(yi)(yi)個經(jing)(jing)常被忽視的因素是(shi)負(fu)責照顧兒童的成年(nian)人(ren)需要花費大量時(shi)間和注意力。許多專注于工作的父(fu)母(mu)往(wang)往(wang)很難花時(shi)間陪伴(ban)孩子，而父(fu)母(mu)一(yi)(yi)方(fang)在家帶娃則(ze)可(ke)能導致經(jing)(jing)濟能力不(bu)足。因此，許多家庭選擇以學校的解(jie)(jie)決(jue)方(fang)案——而不(bu)是(shi)費盡心思安排在家里自學或為孩子報名參加(jia)云端課程計(ji)劃——這種情(qing)況(kuang)可(ke)以理解(jie)(jie)。

結尾段：總之，我認為學校將繼續(xu)作為學習的(de)(de)主(zhu)要(yao)場(chang)所，主(zhu)要(yao)是因(yin)為有著上(shang)文解(jie)釋的(de)(de)不(bu)可替代的(de)(de)價值。不(bu)過(guo)，混合(he)式(shi)學習——在線(xian)活動補充而不(bu)是取代課堂教學——不(bu)失(shi)為適合(he)數字原生代的(de)(de)解(jie)決方案。

【參考范文】

The rise of the Internet and the information explosion in recent years, according to some educationalists, have paved the way for full-fledged e-learning and will eventually make traditional schooling practices obsolete. While this new modality does have unique benefits, it is unlikely a viable alternative to the tried-and-tested classroom approach for three main reasons.

The primary concern about web-based tuition is the lack of guidance by professional educators. Content available online is, in most cases, intended for purposes other than education, so it is often not possible for parents alone to accurately assess their suitability for their children. Experienced teachers, on the other hand, can be much more efficient in curating age-appropriate materials and finetuning learning tasks to suit the needs of their students.

Another reason against virtual learning is the difficulty to remove distractions in the home environment. When seated in front of a laptop at a dining table, casual conversations between family members and sudden noises in the kitchen can divert children’s attention away from the content they are working on. In comparison, a designated classroom and teacher supervision can mean uninterrupted attention during class hours and therefore better outcomes in the long run.

A further, often neglected, factor is the amount of time and attention required on responsible adults. Many parents who are preoccupied with work often struggle to spend quality time with their children, while households with a stay-home mom or dad can suffer from reduced financial capacity. It is therefore understandable for many families to opt for a school-based solution rather than going through the trouble of homeschooling or enrolling their children on cloud-based tuition programmes.

In conclusion, I think schools will continue as the main venue of learning, mainly for the irreplaceable values explained above. That said, a blended approach where online activities supplement, rather than replace, classroom instruction can be a sound solution for the digital native generation.

(315 words)

【語言積累】

1.information explosion 信息爆炸

2.full-fledged e-learning 全面電子(zi)學習

3.make … obsolete 讓……過時

4.new modality 新的模(mo)式

5.web-based tuition線上學習

6.curating age-appropriate materials 策(ce)展適(shi)合孩(hai)子年齡(ling)的材料(liao)

7.designated classroom 專用教室(shi)

8.responsible adults 負(fu)責（照顧兒童）的成人年

9.enrolling their children on 給孩子(zi)報讀(du)

10.venue of learning 學習場所

11.a blended approach 混合(he)學習方式(shi)

12.digital native generation 數字原生代

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