2020年11月7日雅思大作文范文：很多罪犯受罰后依然犯罪

雅思大作文題目：

People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it.

Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

【話題分類】：犯罪類

【題目解析】：

這是一道犯罪(zui)(zui)類話題的“two-question essay”。題目意(yi)思是：很(hen)多罪(zui)(zui)犯即便是受到懲罰(fa)后(hou)仍(reng)會(hui)(hui)繼續犯罪(zui)(zui)。為(wei)什(shen)么(me)會(hui)(hui)出現這一現象？如何防止(zhi)犯罪(zui)(zui)？對于此類型的作文，考生(sheng)需要：

1）在開頭段改寫(xie)題(ti)目，且簡(jian)要地(di)回答題(ti)目中的兩(liang)個問(wen)題(ti)；

2）主體需兩(liang)個段落分(fen)別回答題(ti)目中的兩(liang)個問題(ti)；

3）結(jie)尾段(duan)對主體(ti)段(duan)內容(rong)進行全面(mian)總結(jie)。

【寫作思路】：

開(kai)頭段(duan)：改寫題(ti)目 + 題(ti)目問(wen)題(ti)簡要回答

主體段 1：原因：a) 懲罰力度不(bu)夠大，b）有犯罪前科(ke)的人不(bu)能夠完全被社會接受(shou)

主體段 2：防止犯(fan)罪的方法：a) 加大懲罰力度，b）給(gei)前犯(fan)罪者提供職業培訓(xun)和就業機會

結尾段：通(tong)過“同義轉(zhuan)換”的方式對主體(ti)兩個段落要(yao)點(dian)進(jin)行總結

【參考范文】

Nowadays, it is common that ex-offenders violate the law repeatedly although they have been punished. In this essay, I will initially discuss the reasons for this situation, followed by my suggestions which can assist in preventing crimes from happening.

There are primarily two factors largely responsible for recidivism. To commence with, the sanctions against criminals are not harsh enough. In other words, being punished does not make a huge difference to offenders, leading to the possibility that these people are normally unable to realise the detrimental consequences that breaching the law will entail for victims and society, and such behaviour is likely to be re-exhibited as a result. Additionally, former convicts are not completely accepted in society. People released from prison seem to be automatically judged as those whose character is poor: their family and friends may not embrace them and employers refuse to recruit them. Therefore, nothing can help them to survive but to re-offend.

To cease crimes, several approaches can be adopted. Firstly, the implementation of more punitive measures is effective. Only when people are truly conscious of their wrongdoing both physically and psychologically can they stop themselves from committing crimes. For instance, a longer stint of community service or jail sentence is respectively appropriate for convicts with minor crimes and serious ones. Secondly, providing more vocational training sessions and job opportunities for those with criminal records is another feasible solution. If they can earn a living independently, having sufficient money to afford accommodation and feed themselves, they are rarely motivated to participate in some illegal activities again.

In conclusion, lenient punishments for law breakers and less social tolerance for previous criminals are the two major causes of re-offending. However, if severer penalties can be meted out to prisoners and meanwhile ex-criminals are allowed to have a smoother re-entry into the community, crime issues can be tackled.

(310 words)

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